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ricky2



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PostPosted: Jul Sun 29, 2012 1:32 am    Post subject: Authors only what do you think of my new story? Reply with quote

Prologue: The Dead Father
I was trapped in the middle of the mountain surrounded by the spikes placed on the floor I couldnít move the enemies surrounded us at a quick rate that all I could see was many army grunts with guns swords and pistols surrounding me and my baby sister and our parents I said dad donít try you will get killed I cant look after mum I need you here and he never listened to me he jumped for them and the army bastards killed him on the spot and I shouted in outrage and jumped with my sister to my mum and I said no not you to we need you and I stopped her on the spot. My mum got angry and I slapped her and said donít we need a parent to look after us i canít look after my sister only you can I carried my baby sister on my back

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